The following short story is part of a writing collaboration organized by Samantha Redstreake Geary (visit her site for details.) 28 writers from across the globe joined her in discovering the stories of triumph lurking in the notes of each track from the album Composers for Relief: Supporting the Philippines. The final tales will be compiled into a companion ebook anthology for the album, with all proceeds going to Gawad Kalinga.
My chosen track and the source of inspiration for my story is The Power of Will by Ivan Torrent. I suggest you listen to it while you read.
The Power of Will
“Sterion!” A stranger woman’s
voice drummed in my head. My ears still buzzed with the echo of the last energy
blasts and subsequent shockwave that had knocked me out. Pain surged in my body
and mind. Marble debris stung under my back but the severed bond between my
brave family’s vital energy and mine tormented me the most.
They’re dead.
“Sterion, Grand
General Adleon and the rest of the High Warriors are dead. You’re the last
one!” A silhouette knelt beside me. Her words slurred in a voice too deep to be
natural.
I wiped
blood and sweat from my eyes. Her features cleared. Scars of fire and previous
wounds concealed her age. A red cloak stained in blood and dust concealed her
body. I glanced around. My fallen kin covered the Higher Temple terrace. The stench of charred meat choked me.
“The
Minaret of Renewal!” I tried to sit but swayed.
She put her
arm around my shoulders. “It’s safe.” She
pointed at the magnificent blue tower behind the courtyard wall.
The world
had become a smudge of red and ochre as if the sky bled and burned along with
the citadel. An ominous silence gripped my heart. “The enemy’s army?”
“Destroyed,”
she scanned the surroundings, “but the Devourers of Souls entered the citadel.”
“What?” I
looked at the top of the Minaret. “No light comes from the Beacon of Hope!”
“That’s why the shadows entered. Get up! Your
work is not over.” She tried to pull me up. I didn’t move.
We failed. The torment from my severed bond increased. “All
High Warriors are gone and I am broken… in more ways than one.”
She
straightened and scowled. “Victory is a matter of will and it starts with
choice.”
My grandfather’s last words to the High
Warriors! I looked
up. The power in her gaze equaled the Chosen One’s. Impossible! “Who are you?”
“Ariana,
but that doesn’t matter. The Beacon—”
Screams rose
from the North, wild and shrill. A dark
shadow leapt the last steps onto the marble terrace.
My gun! I lost it!
Ariana took
out an energy gun from under her cloak. She blasted the Devourer’s core. It
cracked and unraveled in countless bluish wisps of trapped souls that darted to
the sky. “They’ve reached the Lower Temple. Will you make Adleon’s death
useless or will you make him proud?”
I struggled
to my feet, ignoring my pain. It would torment me for a long time. “What do you
know—”
Ariana pushed
a sheathed sword against my chest plate, nearly sending me down again.
“Hey, easy now!” My guts twisted when I
grabbed the sword. The carvings were unmistakable. “This is the Grand General’s.”
“Final victory depends on you lighting the
Beacon of Hope to destroy the Devourers.”
“Me?”
Civilians
fleeing from the shadows flooded the Higher Temple terrace.
She clasped
my arm and yelled to the survivors. “Into the sacred courtyard!”
We ran in a
tight group. I halted under the arcade. Arianna trotted back. A hundred people
crossed the courtyard and crowded against the Minaret wall.
I leaned
against a column. “Can’t light the Beacon on my own.”
“Get them to
help you!” She pointed at the crowd.
“It’s not that easy! The Grand General
instilled his power into the High Warriors. We lit the Beacon together!” My
grip on the sword tightened. “A sword doesn’t make me my grandfather. People
need Adleon, the Chosen One!”
“No! People
need to believe they are Adleon. Not every hero is chosen. Many volunteer to become
one. You lost your family but they still need you to keep fighting. Adleon
needs you to live by what he taught you. He believed in you!” She squeezed my
hand. “And so do I.”
The passion
in her eyes ignited renewed energy in my worn-out body.
“The Devourers!”
People screamed at the shadows approaching the arcade, large and dark as their
despair.
Ariana and
I sprinted to the Minaret. Keeping her back against mine, Ariana gunned the Devourers
within range. I faced the survivors. “People
of Theria! Adleon died to protect you by preserving the Minaret of Renewal—”
“The Chosen
One is dead!” Some wailed, others shrank against the tower. The nefarious shadows
closed in.
Grandfather, if your power resides in me help
me to awaken it.
My voice rose
over chaos. “We must complete Adleon’s mission! Lighting the Beacon of Hope will
save us from our enemies!”
“Without
the Chosen One? How?” Someone retorted among the crowd. The Devourers crossed
the arcade. Ariana’s energy gun buzzed. Shadows cracked behind me.
“There
might not be a Chosen One to make things right for you, but you can choose to
be the One!” Conviction overcame my doubts as I spoke. “You don’t choose the obstacles
in your life, but how you face them will always be your choice. Make the right
one now! Adleon’s unique power came from the certainty that we are more than
flesh and bone. There’s courage, determination, and love inside each of us. Allow
yourselves to believe victory can be yours! Seize it!”
Electricity
coiled up my spine, a sign of many newly awaken energies that met and joined
mine. My pain from the severed bond diminished as another bond took place. The
Devourers froze a couple yards away. “Today,
you are High Warriors! Today, believe in yourselves and in others! Use the
power of will and let our enemy feel it!”
“For
Theria!” Ariana shouted, raising her fist up.
“For
Theria!” Our war cry carried the force of enraged waves, crashing against Devourers
front-line.
The synergy
spread and expanded stronger than anything I’d seen before. The power Adleon
possessed manifested itself in every gleaming eye. The tide of determination
was nearly tangible. The Minaret’s top flashed. The Devourers wailed and
cracked, unraveling under a silver blaze from above. The Beacon of Hope shone
brighter than ever. I grinned. My grandfather was right.
Victory is a matter of will and it starts with
choice.
After a lot of hesitation, I decided Mexico would join Mark Koopmans' prompt for a moment of reflection in his 50 States of Pray bloghop. He asked for a moment and about 100 words to share a prayer, a thought, a memory, a hope or even a regret about the past and/or wish for the future to come.
The following thought, as the previous story, I dedicate to all those who are going through difficult times and can hardly find a reason to celebrate. I dedicate it to those who need a hero in their lives, to those with fears, to those with aches and those in need of change. May you all be blessed.
Thank you Al. Such a wise and beautiful post - which I have come to expect from you. Knowing that it doesn't come easily, and comes at a price. Thank you for who you are.
ReplyDeleteI like the new version! Even sharper.
ReplyDeleteChose to be a better person.
Hugs to you, Dragon!
Beautiful Al, just beautiful!
ReplyDeleteYou've captured the theme of the music and the theme of the Season! Merry Christmas, dear sweet dragon, Merry Christmas!
Wow, that just crackled with energy. Beautifully written piece for the project.
ReplyDeleteMerry Christmas!
It is a wondrous thing when we fully embrace the idea that we are in charge. We choose good and bad things. We learn from both choices.
ReplyDeleteMerry Christmas Al!!!
No time to read this right now, oh grandson mine, but I will come back and do so. Loved your message at the end.
ReplyDeleteWishing you a wonderful Christmas and a Happy and definitely healthy New Year. Big hugs.
Lovely!
ReplyDeleteHave a Merry Christmas :)
An empowering piece - both the music and the writing. I'll check out it out, the story theme and music both are highly appealing. Excellent selections.
ReplyDeleteMerry Christmas Sir :)
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I love the story. Everything eventually comes down to choice. We are the sum of our choices and our future selves will be the product of choices we've yet to make. Congrats on the eBook, my friend.
ReplyDeleteAl, you're an artist in so many areas. You inspire. You encourage. And you evoke the best from those you meet. It has been a genuine pleasure getting to know you.
Aloha Al,
ReplyDeleteFirst and foremost, my sincere wishes for a blessed Christmas season for you and your family. I hope you also have a Happy New Year - and may all your Dragon-sized dreams come true :)
Thanks so much for your support of so many worthy causes and being able to support 50 States Of Pray, too:)
You are a scholar and a gentleman, sir and I tip my cap to you, my friend :)
Cheers!
Christmas wasn't always a good season for me. I like the words of encouragement you've posted. Prayers and good thoughts are sent your way.
ReplyDeleteYour post is lovely and I'm glad I spent the time on it today. Merry Christmas to you and yours along with my prayers.
ReplyDeleteMy dear friend,
ReplyDeleteSuperb and the power of will is about choices. Well stated and I was glad you were part of such a worthy cause.
Your words are wise, Al. Carefully, thoughtfully chosen. I heartily concur with what you note. Immerse and embrace your thoughts of wisdom. Yes, we have choices.
I hope you had a peaceful Christmas Day I spent the day alone and yet, I'm never really alone.
Bless you, my friend.
In peace, hope and goodwill,
Gary
I love those inspirational words. They should definitely be in our thoughts as we head into 2014. :-)
ReplyDeleteWOW., FD,,, your inspirational words just sent shivers throughout my body... They really hit home!
ReplyDeleteThank you,
I hope you had a wonderful Christmas! I know this year has had many lows for you, but I wish that the coming year the highs soar and the lows get buried deep within the earth only to sprout and create the strongest of trees to grace our lovely earth.
Sending you lots of holiday hugs!
Your powerful piece embodies a compelling message, Al. You've pulled an amazing story from Ivan's music--I love every word! Happy Holidays, my dragon friend:)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, Al. That is a glorious story, full of emotion and energy! I love your inspiring words in "Choose" as well. I need to keep re-reading them.
ReplyDeleteChoose and will are powerful weapons. Moving story, Al. Keep that beacon of hope lit. :)
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the building action in both the song and the story. Mighty words and music.
ReplyDeleteThe Warrior Muse
'Choose to do the things that others won't, So you achieve the things that others can't'. That's an awesome quote - did you write it?
ReplyDeleteVisiting from Mark's bloghop :)
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Hi Al - Thank you for enlightening me about the Composers for the Philippines - I'd seen the logo, but hadn't realised the connection .. I enjoyed your choice and then the story line ...
ReplyDeleteYour prayer is so right .. we all have choices ... I hope everyone in the world will have peaceful and blessed existences ... Hilary
Thanks for your comments! Sorry I cant reply one by one but I only have the iPad and little online access. My best to all.
ReplyDeleteWonderful post, Sir Dragon! So much awesomeness and charity, and seeing as I love composer work, I'll have to check out that album. Loved your fiction and your prayer is spot on! :)
ReplyDeleteGreat story, Al, so exciting - and for such a worthy cause. I'm wishing you a happy, healthy, and prosperous 2014! :-)
ReplyDeleteYour dedication and caring shine. Happy New Year to you and all those you care about.
ReplyDeleteI loved it Dragon. Great story.
ReplyDeleteLovely translation of music...really enjoyed this!
ReplyDeleteWonderful story, beautiful prayer! Best of the holidays to you!
ReplyDeleteit was amazing! so good so good!! I felt everything with such an impact and inspiration. be proud! dragon hugs!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you for the story, and the music was incredible.
ReplyDeleteI hope 2014 is the Year of the Dragon for you!
Lovely, but, of course, I expected no less. Here's to victory!
ReplyDeleteWhat an amazing story, Al!
ReplyDeleteA toast to the power of will, the gift of choice, and the accompanying victory!
Happy New Year!
A fine rewrite, Al, and this version has a lot more power and has touched many as evidenced by the comments it's garnered. I also appreciated the quotes that followed the story. Well done.
ReplyDelete"Victory is a matter of will and it starts with choice." Perfect quote. I love this spin down the hero's path, a reluctant hero, but a hero, nonetheless. A hero inspires the people and that's exactly what your protagonist did. Wonderful tale, beautiful imagery, and flawless match to the accompanying music. Thank you for a great read, Al, and have a blessed new year.
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I am so jealous of your many amazing talents! Excellent story. LOVE the meme. You don't mind me stealing it, do you? I love it. I want it poster size!!
ReplyDeleteMerry 2014 Father Dragon!!
I'm popping in to wish you a happy, peaceful and productive 2014, Father Dragon.
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