As most of you probably know, I’m in the final stages of publishing my debut novel. Our beloved dragon asked me to write about the importance of finishing the project, the obstacles I faced, the challenges I solved, and how the whole experience feels, to see my book about to be released.
Whew! That’s a tall order.
I’ll tackle it in parts.
Getting
it started...
In January of 2012, I created a
document titled Come Back and jotted
some ideas I had for a story. Though I considered whether or not it should, that
working title didn’t change... one of the benefits of going indie.
My daughter and I had previously
read a book that was written like a diary, from the perspective of teenage girl
traveling west on the Oregon Trail. The book mentioned various belongings
travelers dumped to lighten their loads, so the animals pulling their wagons
could survive the trip. I imagined a young lady using these items to survive in
the wild, and my story was born.
When I started writing Come Back, I had already written two
full-length novels. They weren’t horrible (after applying multiple critiques),
but they weren’t of debut quality. I knew I had to do better before I could
even think about publishing, so I
decided to start fresh.
I’m sure my family wondered if I
was truly serious or just lollygagging with my nose stuck in a laptop for hours
a day. I’d been writing since August of 2010 and was on my third book. I could
tell they didn’t understand my choice to wait like my fellow writers did.
Now, they do.
Getting
it finished...
Much of the work I did in the
beginning was research. I have a heart for historicals, but my worst subject in
school was history. (Go figure. LOL) Come
Back is a romance, and that’s the focus, but I wanted the surrounding events
to be accurate and setting to feel real. I had to do a lot of reading and
double checking to make sure I didn’t commit some huge faux pas.
Weapons of the day had to be
studied, as did technology, government structure, and laws. (Ex: hay bale had to be replaced with haystack because balers hadn’t been
invented yet.) This is one of the downsides to going indie, no researchers on
staff to help you edit. :P
Along with mechanical inventions
(or lack thereof), I had to carefully mind etymology. You’d be surprised how
many words and phrases I had to cut or change along the way to remove modern
language from the text. I’m sure I missed something, and I took a tiny bit of
license here and there, but I made a serious effort.
There were plot obstacles, too. The
story started as nothing more than visions of a young woman being left behind
in the wilderness and a hero rescuing her. I had to build a plausible story
around those two simple points. Throw in beat sheets, historical accuracy, and
reader expectations, and you get a huge literary mountain to climb.
Last but not least were the
emotional lows that came with writing some of the scenes and subject matter. (Come Back is not a light read.) I had to
dig into some dark times to make my story authentic. I’ll be guest posting on
Liz Blocker’s blog later this week about that.
Was it tough? You bet.
Am I glad I stuck with it?
Absolutely!
Awaiting
the big day...
By the time you read this, the
critiques and proofreading will have been done, the edits applied, and (if all
goes as planned) my precious manuscript will be in the hands of the formatter.
After that I’ll start final preparations for the release.
I have a printout of the book’s
cover tacked to a bulletin board above my desk. I remember the first time the graphics
designer sent me a proof. I almost cried.
“I have chills,” I told her.
“This is really real, isn’t it?”
I could picture her smile as I
read her reply. “It IS real. You’re going to be a published author in a few
months. That’s your name on the cover. Imagine holding this labor of love in
paperback form for the first time. It’s going to be amazing.”
I know it will.
I’d be lying if I said I haven’t
had insecure moments—paralyzing moments, for that matter. Beta feedback has
been positive, and that has bolstered my confidence some, but the true test
will come when I hand my story over to the public.
What keeps me going is that cover
and all it symbolizes. I worked hard and finished something creative and
worthwhile. No one can take that from me. Ever.
Thank you, Father Dragon, for
hosting me. I’m honored you invited me to your cave.
Book information:
Title: Come Back
Genre: Western Historical Romance
Category: Adult / New Adult
Expected release: May 12, 2014
'Sometimes a single choice alters the course of a person's life forever.'
Native Texan Melissa Maygrove is a wife, mother, nurse, freelance editor, and romance writer. When she's not busy caring for her tiny nursery patients or shuttling teenagers back and forth to after-school activities, she's hunched over her laptop, complicating the lives of her imaginary friends and playing matchmaker. Melissa loves books with unpretentious characters and unforgettable romance, and she strives to create those same kinds of stories for her readers.
It was a pleasure to have you at the cave, Melissa. I and the dwarves wish you the best of lucks!
Thank you Father Dragon - you have a heart which is possibly a little too big for your cave. And Melissa's work sounds wonderful - and I am thrilled for her that soon, very soon, she will be able to hold her literary baby.
ReplyDeleteI agree. Father Dragon does have a huge heart.
DeleteThanks, EC.
Melissa, you took the time to do it right. You'll start off in a much better position than most. (Like me, who still has no idea what I'm doing.)
ReplyDeleteOne more month and it will be real!
Thanks, Alex.
Delete(I disagree. I think you do very well. ;)
I'm still pinching myself. LOL
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ReplyDeleteWishing you the best of luck Melissa. Grandmother Dragon
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jo. :)
DeleteYAY!! This is a great post, Melissa - I really enjoyed reading and learning about your process. And you are a FAST writer. From first brainstorming to published in two years??? That's fantastic. Especially with all of that research (and boy do I hear you on that one...)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Liz.
DeleteIt has been an intense experience, that's for sure!
Sounds awesome. Good luck on your release, it can be scary, but it is an amazing experience.
ReplyDeleteBrandon Ax: Writer's Storm
Thank you, Brandon. I hope the book is well received.
DeleteMelissa, what a fascinating journey! And it IS real...hard work pays off ;)
ReplyDeleteHugs, Father Dragon!!!
Yes it is. I have to keep pinching myself, though. LOL
DeleteRock it, Melissa! And the dwarves bathed for you too... :)
ReplyDeleteThe historicals are very hard work but so rewarding for the reader when the author puts in the details they might not even catch but pulls them deeper into the story! Congrats and savor the experience!
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Yup. They even combed their hair over in a nice, smooth part, but their ears still poke through. :P
DeleteThanks, River.
What a great beginning for a story Melissa since the Oregon Trail was a rich part of American history. Another fine interview Al.
ReplyDeleteOf course, I had to make it difficult and use the Gila. It was fun trying to research a less-written-about trail. LOL
DeleteThanks for visiting, Maurice.
Woohoo Melissa! Congrats on your book. Looks awesome. I'm also glad the dwarfs took a bath just for you (I didn't know dwarfs could take baths ...). :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, David!
DeleteThose little guys smell good. They clean up well. :)
Congratulations Melissa! So much hard work went into this novel and it is about to pay off for you.
ReplyDeleteI hope so, Robin. Thanks for your kind words. :)
DeleteCongrats, Melissa! I also wrote 2 before the 3rd was pubbed. You're right that etymology and idiom are so important to writing historical. Great post! :)
ReplyDeleteThe Online Etymology Dictionary is my friend. *grin*
DeleteWriting novels takes us on such interesting journeys. I'm amazed at how much I learn when I'm trying to put a story that has accurate background integrated into it. Here's to having all of your research and diligence pay off. Good luck.
ReplyDeleteCheers to that! :)
DeleteCongrats, Melissa! So happy for you!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Lara. :)
DeleteI LOVE historical fiction. I wrote one and should be starting the edits on it soon. I have ulcer feelings of worry- did I do enough research? I did the same as you, checked laws...read journals- trying to get the voice right-but I know there will be flaws. And wise readers will find them. Like the phrases. I've tried to use sayings I found in journals, but I know I've gotten some things wrong.
ReplyDeleteI will have to read yours. Love the concept and it's already right up my alley!
I know I've probably messed some things up, too, but I did try. I just hope the story and the line-by-line writing are good enough that people won't care. ;)
DeleteMelissa, thanks for sharing your journey. Sometimes it feels like people just write and publish, and we forget it is really a process and sometimes we write a few books before we find the one we want to publish.
ReplyDeleteHey Dragon friend! SHs. :)
Glad you found my mile-long post helpful.
DeleteI know what you mean. For a while, it seemed everyone I knew was publishing. I thought my day would NEVER come.
So happy for Melissa! It's wonderful to read about her journey to this point. And she has to know she is special if the dwarves took a bath and got all cleaned up for her. :D
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteYes. LOL Father Dragon told them the Goddess of Grammar was coming, and they scampered for any water and soap they could find. :P
Congratulations Melissa!
ReplyDeleteHard work and perseverance pay off!
And that cover is awesome!
Thank you, Michelle.
DeleteWe all comment on blogs all the time, but these kind words folks are leaving mean a lot to me. :)
Such a great journey! Can't wait for the release!!
ReplyDeleteMe neither! :)
DeleteRushing just to get your book out there is the worst thing a writer can do. You did it the right way, Melissa.
ReplyDeleteThanks for that.
DeleteSome of my family members and friends got impatient. I reminded them that once it's out there, you can't get it back. Better to be sure. ;)
Sounds like you had a plan and it's coming to fruition!
ReplyDeleteCongratulations!
Great idea for a post Father Dragon, giving hope to all who tackle great projects!
I'm nervous, but I'm excited, too. Time (and readers) will tell...
DeleteAwesome story. You should be proud of your work, because you produced something wonderful.
ReplyDeleteThanks. That means a lot coming from you. ;)
DeleteResearch is the name of the game when it comes to separating a good book from a great one. You deserve to reward yourself. Ask Father Dragon to have his dwarves give you a foot message and a pedicure.
ReplyDeleteOo. A mini pedi? Yes, please! :D
DeleteI love your premise! Thank you for sharing your writing journey - I can imagine the etymology would be a tough one, along with all the other history research.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations!
Thanks, Tyrean.
DeleteVery much enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing your process. Good luck with the release Melissa!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Maggie. :)
Deletegreat this article
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